|Reviews for Angel cake|
| AK the Twilight 6/12/08 . chapter 1
The tried-and-true theme of the "angel on Earth" is what I found this to be. It accomplishes the message well, though I found the ending to be a bit less accomplished compared to the rest of this great poem. The photograph image puts strong emphasis on the humanity, though you insist on the image's angelic nature.
This was a bit messy, mechanic-wise. It felt confusing when describing the angelic and human nature both at once. However, this still was very well written, just not your best.
All in all, good job.
| simpleplan13 6/9/08 . chapter 1
I like all the questions about the angel. That's really great. I also liked the repetition at the end.
| Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 6/9/08 . chapter 1
Another beautiful piece. I like your choice of words
An ephemeral existance
This is very good, nice work.
| thursdays and rain 6/9/08 . chapter 1
sad.. nice descriptions though ;)