Alright, you probably just read my review for What is a Hero? and I take back what I said. the lack of punctuation and capitals is good. It makes it more like you're talking, less formal and structured.
Anyways, I really like this poem.

really really really like this one. really

I can completely picture you as you "heave yet another sigh"; it gives a very clear image! I like the imagery of "Their views and desires form around me as bars" though it feels a little too long or something for its positioning in the poem. I also like how you ask them, "Is it so wrong to wish upon the stars?" because I have wondered that myself. :) "They never ask what path I wish to take,/ They never gave me a choice to make" really reinforces the idea of being caged. The last line has a very solid message . . . having people listen to what you have to say is what everyone wants, right?
:)