Please! Write more!

Hello! You don't write what s happen after? I'm sad... :(

i like how the story is going...but yeah, i think you should write in a third person pov... but it's cool either way... and yeah more details would be good. still, love the story. :)

i like the starting with the gangster thing so don't change it up too much k :)

Aww, it was perfect. I can't wait for more!

Its okay

It's an interesting story so I hope you'll write more about it. good luck

Its alright. In my case I just got to it today.
Personally (if you want my opinion) Id stick with the old chapters and build on them. I dont think they are jumbled. They just give a sense that the plot will get thicker and the characters will grow as you get deeper into the plot development.
but that's just from one writer to another. If you ask me its ok to keep it a little on the loose end in the first few chapters.
If i was in your shoes I'd keep the first five chapters and start to develop a deeper in depth on the characters and the plot from this point on. Since the first few chapters already got people hooked lol

what happened to the rest of the story?

The story is really interesting so far, and I definitely enjoy reading it. Hope to read more from you soon.

when are you going to continue this story its great and very interesting makes me want to know what happens next.

Good day, I was really wanted to read this story and put it off for a while. I started reading and it was really good, really good!. Ok I'm getting exicted (_). I really enjoyed this story and its potential of being great. Please reconsider and finsih or just add a few more chapters please.

when are you going to update this story! update it please!

Please please please can we have an update soon. Such an interesting story.

if erin is one of the stonewall isnt that incest? i might be confused.