|Reviews for His Baby|
| Critiqui 8/28/11 . chapter 1
*Erin* is the female variation for *Aaron*... So, is this main character female? Or is it that his name is just spelled in the feminine way? I don't know, the spelling just kinda got me messed up. LOL Still, awesome story. Keep going!
| OtakuMe 6/18/11 . chapter 6
| midnight41 6/9/11 . chapter 6
i really like the plot so far and the first person pov is pretty good. but i think the characters should have more personality. i cant really tell what their feeling. Please updae soon! :D
| moon01234 4/28/11 . chapter 6
This looks awesome. v
Really, really need to read more of it. Update soon?
| kiki19857 4/25/11 . chapter 6
any update yet?
| ceeda 3/30/11 . chapter 6
You are FINALLY BACK! I thought this story was gone for good. Hope to see more Chapters soon!
| JtheChosen1 3/30/11 . chapter 6
I am VERY glad that you are going to re-write this and then continue this! The plot is certainly one of a kind and you had the perfect mix of humor, drama, and angst. I cannot wait for the new version!
| myoregon 3/30/11 . chapter 6
I'm so glad you're continuing this story. It's one of my favorites and I usually don't follow stories until they have a lot more chapters because most authors never finish. But, you're story intrigued me and I decided to give it a try. Only to be disappointed that you only made it a few chapters in.
I don't think you need to change much. Grammar and spelling mostly. I think you should write in first or third person depending on what comes easiest for you. Because the story will be much better if you're writing it in a style that's easiest for you. Also, getting a beta reader can really help.
Anyway, that's my opinion. I hope you will finish the story. You've had me hooked.
| RitaHouston 3/28/11 . chapter 6
| Johnny101 3/28/11 . chapter 6
thank you for comming back!
| jessicas favorite stories 3/28/11 . chapter 6
i was having a massivley shitty night then i saw this. it made me feel better XD welcome back. i lookinbg forward to it
| XMutherfknxPrincesx 1/31/11 . chapter 1
so far i like it a lot ..why did u stop posting or is it complete already?
| anythingiwanttowatch 12/31/10 . chapter 5
Love your story.
| XxXMusicSavesMySoulXxX 8/4/10 . chapter 5
LOVE your story. Hope you update soon. :D
| thecakethief 6/16/10 . chapter 1
aagh! you dont know how bad you hooked me with the mafia thing! i love mafia stories and mpreg stories, AND YOU GENIUS, you combined them! thank you so much! oh, and i'd give you a kangaroo in exchange for updating soon, kay? :D