o wow. i absolutely love it, your really good.

sometimes things are better left unsaid, but that doesn't mean you don't want to know. -sighs-

beautiful. silence could never be louder.

Oh, it's beautiful! And full of pain--wonderful.

McKinley

That was good it really is a great poem.
Love it.

Wow. I like this but hate you :glares: stupid person able to think enough to actually write something. Though still nothing with the story, eh? Jeez Dani let's get on that shall we? Chop-chop. :P

Still good poem even if i do hate you

Great poem! I think it would read better though if you made "but that is one jump.." "but that's one jump" just because you've been using contractions throughout the rest of the poem.

I think there's a lot of true about not saying some things, I like the poem 'cause it's gripping by the way.