you should make this into a longer story

I think someone just wanted to write a sex scene (that someone being you =D)

I'm sorry but... You're seventeen? And writing like this?


Wow...

Well before all the odd lemon started it seemed good.

steamy

massive aggression! I like it! Hoping you'll continue w/ the story...it seems fun to read ^^

What the hell?! *Shaking head*

I loved it. I think it would be a really good idea to expand but what you have for just a one shot was great. Nice job.

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

lol great first chapter cant wait 2 see where this story goes :)

I love werewolf stories - I have a secret fondness for them! This one was very cute. Is it a bit hot in here, thought? Whew! :)