:D YAY

This story had me cracking up a few times lol. I like that the chapters are longer now and good development between the characters.

Sweet, short chapter...ur updates are far apart though..

Snot Monkeys??

LOL stalker policeman?

If that was me I'd work some stupid unneccesarily elaborate plan to catch him. And then I'd get it very very wrong.

Oh wait that already happened :P

Update soon. Please. I hate waiting for the next chapter

this story is marked as complete but its not.

the actually story is interesting but slow. also, the beginning was better than the last few chapters.

Aah cops named Jerry...lol Jerry does sound funny though, more soon?

Short but pretty good. Still kind of going nowhere though.

I, too, loved Microecon. It was a good class, much better than taking Macroecon, which sucked balls.
Oh, and this is a pretty good story so far. My only complaint is that the chapters are ridiculously short. That's all. :)

this chapter was too short! funny, but short

[I had dined in the place, and everyone knows that food consumption in another’s home, whoever that ‘another’ may be, automatically lessens the strangeness factor upon re-entry.]
Haha, I love little lines like this that you throw in. They're so relatable, which makes me like Aria even more.

And Josiah...hah, he's such a sadisic bastard. His antics just seem to get better by the chapter. I particularly liked this one becuase of how you spaced it out, allowing a longer chapter than usual.

I really hope you update this soon. I can't wait to see where it goes :D

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

Haha, I love his little explaination. Very Josiah. Also nice reaction from Aria, like she's just so used to his antics that she's not very surprised.

[“Whoa. Chill.”]
I didn't really get why he said that at that time. Was there something about her body language that was particularly tense? Maybe describe that before he speaks because I was confused.

Haha, 54 mile per hour zone? Nice bit of humor to add to an otherwise serious situation.

Also, again, I love your new character. You always manage to give your characters--even the small ones--such personalities.

You know, I didn't even notice that plot whole. I figured something along those lines. I guess it couldn't hurt to put that in when you're revising, though.

[his car had both air condition] conditioning

Pretty good chapter. Not a whole lot to it, but still good narration and in-character. I particularly liked that Josiah went back to his typical stuck-up self after a softer side of him in the last chapter.

[and when it came up with the reasonable equation of ‘embarrassment due to and guilt for half-lying earlier equals repayment of a ride’, I let it slide.]
Nice line. Funny, in-character, and very much like a train of thought.

Also, the transition in their relationship is going well. Not too heavy, but not too subtle either. They seem to be at a good point considering that you're at 31/99.

New chapters? I really need to check in more often.

The first thing that hit me about this chapter was that the first few lines were too spaced out. You could easily combine some of those, because right now it reads very disjointed.

But good chapter otherwise. I understand your predicament about the one problem, so I don't think the length is an issue. I like her thought process after complying to work with him, because it kept her very in-character even with and out-of-character decision.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)