love it! i missed this story so much. can't wait to see how it plays out, however i do hope you keep that kiss in the bathroom.

Okay, so I definitely like this chapter better. It's more developed, and there's not as much rushing as I think I remembered before. Much better job. Kudos!
*hugs*
~Mary
(btw, I changed my pen name from Cupcake101 I think it might have been when I reviewed before, so...yup.)

YAY! You're back! I'm so excited! *happy dance*
I think this version was WAY better than the original one, and you kno0w how much I enjoyed the first one! I can't wait to read more!!


I have a liveJournal,too- I go by 2SweetSunshine there as well. I'm gonna add you, but I don't quite know how things work over there. Do you have to add me, too, or what? Idk, guess I'll figure it out! lol

old reader in the HOUSE...

haha i just felt like being lame there...

anyways, im excited to see where you're taking this (you said you made some plot changes) and I'm hoping it wont be all the same. really, i am. anyways, i have to go meet with someone so im going to just...leave. okay bye.

I love it! The girls got a little more..spunk? Shes got more backbone. I have a feeling this is going to be a GREAT story! (:

Wow.
I didn't know how much I missed this story =]
I kind of like the new path you're taking and I'm interested to see where it's going.
Update soon!! =]

I love this story so much!

wow, I love it.

I love it! You have the perfect mix of friendship and antagonism between Ryan and Renae. I can't wait to see them fall in love. I also like the fact that Renae and her friends actually do things, like set up for worship and practice soccer - it reads more like a real teenager's life. I'm excited to keep reading!

~*=P AW...Well anyways hope u can revise it quickly n update soon cuz' it'z an awesome story! =D*~

What?!?!?!
I thought it was amazing!!
I love it!!
You better revise it soon!!
You have fans waiting for it!!
(:

Aww, I was really excited for another chapter!
It's okay, we (well, I) understand. You grow out of your characters, and you think that everything is terrible when everyone else thinks its golden. I hope that you get around to changing this story to how you want it. I really enjoyed it. :)

Ned more

I love your little remarks you think of:

“Have fun eating dirt,” she whispered.
“Oh, hon. That might be a delicacy in your world, but in mine, we prefer to leave dirt on the ground,” I said before stepping back.

They were so cool. Only not really.

oh god i would b so mad if theyb had tried to follow me~! i hope she doesnt ead george on cuz he loves her, doesnt he? i feel depressed just thinking that she'll break his heart :(