|Reviews for Selfpity|
| Erica 9/2/08 . chapter 1
I like this. It's very open minded. But also very interesting.
| digna's boobs 8/26/08 . chapter 1
if i give you my boobs will you feel better? jk.
| melo 7/3/08 . chapter 1
jus one sentence: you are your own worst enemy
| Undead Serenade 6/10/08 . chapter 1
"Submerged in self-pity"
is the best line in this poem, it feels like someone face down and it fits how self pity feels. The rest of the poem is okay, I think it could have been done a bit stronger, but it does give the emotion and feeling I think you wanted to convey. I'm sorry this is how you feel, though.