haha this reminds me of a bunch of conversations with my brother. the both of you sound so funny! this is just what i needed; light, funny, and entertaining. keep up the awesomeness.

LMFAO!

that was great!

it really got a chuckle out of me D

Made me laugh! Taking over the world...ah, every girl's dream :)

Funny!

this was really cute! funny too. i love these kinds of stories, but the first paragraph wasn't that great. it didn't hook me in. i like the way you wrote it. very funny, very cute. i hope you write more!

Kay

-snorts-

I did actually find that rather funny, I didn't think that I would, but I did. I thought it would be your average, badly written story about taking over the world, but it was AWESOME! I loved how you wrote it so that I could practially see the characters and how they just seemed so real. My only real problem with the story is that the beginning IS kinda boring, like I said before, I thought it was going to be medeocre, and those sort of things make readers stop reading your story! I recommend changing at least the short of "A/N" at the beginning. GREAT STORY THOUGH!

Write on!



PS: This is SO going in my C2!