|Reviews for Drained|
| Phantasmagoria Land 10/22/09 . chapter 1
i love how you've captured this moment in so little words. great job.
| FlawlesslyImperfect 7/16/08 . chapter 1
I think this is great because it can be interpreted in many different ways. Love it.
| Chidori Nadare 6/14/08 . chapter 1
Hm...I really like this type of poems, the 'slice of life' poems. The punctuation is good but I think the first line should have a comma because I think it would flow even better (It's just my preference though).
I think this haiku is about:
a. an implied writer's block or,
b. we reach the peak of our topics that we'll just 'recycle' them over and over again.
I enjoyed this poem. Great job and keep it up!
| angels know the rest 6/13/08 . chapter 1
Reminds me of my relationship with a friend. I like it.
| moonsliver86 6/12/08 . chapter 1
interesting. not much imagery but captures an interesting slice of reality. interesting.