i love how you've captured this moment in so little words. great job.

I think this is great because it can be interpreted in many different ways. Love it.

Hm...I really like this type of poems, the 'slice of life' poems. The punctuation is good but I think the first line should have a comma because I think it would flow even better (It's just my preference though).

I think this haiku is about:

a. an implied writer's block or,

b. we reach the peak of our topics that we'll just 'recycle' them over and over again.

I enjoyed this poem. Great job and keep it up!

-C.N

Reminds me of my relationship with a friend. I like it.

interesting. not much imagery but captures an interesting slice of reality. interesting.