@Heather:

Well just so you know, the story isn't incest. Incest would suggest that both Jeremy and Andrew were brothers with a sexual and romantic relationship. Since they are not related, it's not incest.

As for where I'm going with it, well, I do know where it's going :) You'll just have to read and find out.

Twisted story but if incest ficton isn't twisted as well then idk but anyways love the story so far, do you have any idea where you are going with the story?

Oh my god, there's a kid named Andrew Wells at my school. :D I read this and laughed my bloody ass off imagining Andy raping someone... which might be a little twisted, but hey, whatev. I like it. :]

wha so cute chapter! andrew is all nervous but actually jeremy is as well hahaha! loved it! and the blowjob scene, nice!

Hee hee, fellatio, that IS a funny word . . . But anyway, I'm glad you updated! This chapter was very good, and I liked that Andrew got all choked up. It DOES make this seem more human, as humans are prone to mistakes. I like that you add those little tidbits in there. Hope you update soon!

aww i really liked this chapter!

wow thanks for this!!

Ah!! That wasn't a personal critque of your writing really, more a qustion of style. I've got a short attention span, lol. So going through each chapter twice in different POV's just seemed repetitive (to me). As for the idiot comment, Wells is constantly thinking that Jeremey is stupid. I was wondering if that's just him looking down on other people or if Jeremy really isn't that bright. Was there a reason that Jeremy had no clue whether he was being sexually harassed? It wasn't that clear to me in the chapters, though I suppose alternating Pov's probably WOULD clear that up. Lmao.

You have some very original characters, their personalities stand out a lot. Maybe I'm reading this wrong. It does remind me a little of Manga-style sory lines. Which would explain the embellishment.

Seems like your style changed in ch5. The chapters redone in alternating POV annoyed me a little. Very interesting. I was left wanting to know more about Wells and whether Jeremy really was an idiot or if there was a reason (backstory) for why he was so clueless.

Dayyum you gotta update soon, I wanna see their relationship form ( good or bad )

i love it (:
can't wait for the next chapter !

your story is so original ! that's perfect right there and there 's no spelling mistakes (unless i missed them :P)

huh, I knew the laptop would do! :D

hey, welcome back! believe me I was starting to forget about the fic! I couldn't remember where you dropped it last and I had to read the previous chapter to refresh my memory! but anyhow, I love this fic! ^_^

please update soon and make it as delicious as possible! :P ;)

oh. my. god. thank you so much for updating! i adore your story! and im so glad that theres been a little progress between andy and jerry, even if it did get interrupted.
i know mike is just looking out for his friends best interest but he's annoying dammit! so not cool...

anyway, til next time!

lol when you put it like that...it must be nice to have that much stamina as a 32yr old man with a sore ankle and a nearly broken nose. lawl. loved reading it. I hope to read more from you.

Happy writing
~Shik