I really liked the balance between humor and emotions in this story. You kept it humorous, but at the same it has the ability to make you think. Nicely done!

That was very interesting. It had a very poetic movement with subtle, not necessarily "laugh-out-loud" humor, but delicately placed. Yet it still brings in human emotions and thoughts very explicitly with no tainting. The more I think about it, the more I appreciate this. I read that one comment that says that they don't exactly understand why this is "Humor;" it's just a different sense of humor that starts off jovially and then morphs into ironic humor. Great job! I liked this very much!

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I really enjoyed reading it, although I'm not sure what's so funny about it. You've got great vocabulary range, and I liked reading your detailed descriptions so much that you're officially added to my favourite author's list. I could picture that girl's face SO clearly in my mind...

hm...it was as funny as I first thought, but it was still a good read.