 Ashelin 2008-06-11 . chapter 1What is it if not a poem? Poetry isn't always so...structured as people assume. What really is poetry? No one really knows. But I liked this. All the different reactions. At first it seemed sort of creepy, but then you realize it's not that sort of love they're going for. Or maybe it is, but there is something that isn't so much sexual as much...wishing to be admired and loved purely. Good job. |