Okay, that Caila thing is really starting to bother me. And what is a "Vampire Kiss"? Is that just like a regular kiss, or are they sucking each other's blood, or what?

Um, isn't her name Elizabeth? Why is everyone calling her Caila?

Interesting, i guess...It can use some work. Some things are a bit overexplained, and such-it could probably because a decent book. :P

YAY!! Another favourite story!

this was excellent keep up the good work and writing.

I kinda wished it would be a bit longer, but I am looking forward to the sequel and I will read Vampire Kisses. Bye!

Well, I'm not ACTUALLY reviewing, I just forgot to add you to my alert list . .

OH! Come on! Why can't the third be written already! As if I don't have to wait for enough vampire love stories already!! (See shows how I love it)
;-)

Yees, it took me a while (Elizabeth=Calia), but yeah . . wo! Hmm I'd like to know exactly what Mangus looks like and Calia/Elizabeth . .

Wow, this is going pretty good. I have to say that i am looking forward to the next chapter. nice work. As you say, there are a lot of mistakes, but they can still be fixed when you can get to them.

sorry, I don't mean to be a perfectionist or something, but I try to tell you your errors so you can fix them (believe me everyone has a few). Okay. In the ninth and twenty-first paragraphs, "kayos" should be spelled as "chaos". Um, most of your quotes are using no punctuation at all, which you might want to fix. In the fourth paragraph "non the less" is incorrect. I really hope that you add another chapter soon (I love the story) and good luck on other reviews!
-MW

Okay... let's see. In the first and fourth paragraphs, "loose" should be corrected to "lose". The grammar needs yet still a bit more work. But, I like the story and the way it is going. Good job!

The grammar isn't so great, but a nice summary, nevertheless. One question though: How can a vampire die? Well, really, I know that this is fiction, but in most stories I have read vampires are already dead... aren't they?