I like this one entirely better than the first! :) Is he a teacher or something and it's a forbidden romance?

-Alex

Are these the same characters as the other one? If they are, this is a really great insight into those characters. Even if it's not, great job!

This is a good little story...it shows so much of both their characters in so few words. I like the side remarks in italics, they're the parts when she's being most honest.

I'm in a similar situation actually...it hurts.