Aww, Luthy, you're such a sweetheart. Aww. It's kind of sickening actually. =D Nah, I'm kidding.

The repetition of right now was a bit much, but other than that I liked the piece because it was really sweet. I also liked the second line because it was cute. The rhyming was nice as well. I hoped he appreciated it!


PS. If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile)