This story seems very intresting and I'm eager to read more, once I have the time, Great job!

This is amazing! :D this is now on my favorites list. Please keep writing when you can! ^^

ohmyfreakingod! this is AMAZING! I LOVE this story! pls write more! XD so spectacular!

Listen here missy. Next tiem I talk to you, you are in for it idk y tho... Is it quiet in here or is it just me? It's just me, I've got voices in my head telling me to do not so nice things. I'm gunan lsiten to them! Yay! World domintation! ops there went one I named him CAs, cuz well it was cAs. Don't ask I am so totally bored in this stupid class and can't get my stupid gray haired teacher to shut up!

hey:) thanks for the review, just returning the favor. I think the intro is pretty good. i think it should be more descriptive tho, but it definitely drew me in anyway. I think romance/drama is going to become my new favorite genres haha :)

This sounds like a good story.
I will go to the nezt chapter now.

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update soon =D

This was really good =]
It's starting to make a lot more sense

I have one tiny critique
When it says "Dad’s, what to do with ‘em huh?"
it should be Dads not Dad's because the apostrophe shows ownership, and you're just talking about a general group of something.

Anyway it was a really good chapter, update soon.

really greAT IT LIKE AMAZING CANT WAIT FOR UPDATE

really good i loved it =]

so i'm really not sure what to think of this story yet
it seems pretty good, i'm a tad bit confused as to what's going on...i'm sure that will be cleared up though and i'm looking forward to it. update soon =D

If anything, I don't think you should delete it. It's an interesting story, and even though the beginning is a little...ordinary, it's meant to be like that--after all, it's an intro. I think. Anyway, I'm intrigued to see what happens next. Post away! :)