I like the poem,but i felt like you were going to go much deeper into it and then it ended...

[But you mad me] I think you misspelled the "mad" I think you meant "made"
So you might wanna change it
But it was a good poem
I know what you mean about the site ruining to form of a poem
ugh
It does it to mine too
We'll suffer together

Does this one go back to your other poem Je taime, you know i hate fiction press, they mess up my formatt too... ()T__T. Let me know when you write again, by the way commas are you best friend and so are periods!