 Eun Ai Hoshi 2008-06-18 . chapter 1Brilliant job, once again. You've grasped a clear image with your words through one character's perspective enabling readers to feel and see the whole scenario. It was touching and sad. I wish a better fate awaited Kumotta. Hopefully to all those people in this world you get dumped after a time of use, good fate will sooner or later befall them. Or so I'd like to believe :) Good job. It was thought-provoking and interesting one-shot. Great job. |