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| LadyRini478 2008-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseThis is very good, and what I liked about it was that there was "fluff" in it, the story got right down to what I wanted to know. Of course, you didn't elaborate anything further after they undressed. *sighs* What a cliffhanger! Anyway, write the next chapter soon! |