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Sephiroth Critic 2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Your main character is... awesome! And she reminds me much of myself. Sort of. In a sense. And she is portrayed very well both from her own perspective and from the perspectives of others. And I found it rather hilarious that no one had noticed her before, and then everyone thought she was the new girl. Rin's extreme behavior contrasts pretty sharply with the relative normality of everyone else.
D.sweet's 2008-10-29 . chapter 4
"I didn't see that one coming". This is probably my favorite episode. Rin's pop star cousin is a good addition to the story.
D.sweet's 2008-10-21 . chapter 3
"This story gets more socially interesting each chapter" I like how all the characters were together in that setting and I'm glad I got a glimpse of Rin's past in that once upon a time format. I now better understand how she feels.
D.sweet's 2008-10-10 . chapter 2
Sorry I haven't been around in a wile, it's a long story, Anyway I like how you've been titling you stories. It's like the girls are heros in their own way. Like I said before I like Rin's personality and it's funny how everyone is bothering her at this point in her life. I can't wait to see where this story goes. If you have free time you can check out and review my story "Real Fiction".
Orriolle Gryphen 2008-09-18 . chapter 1
Wow... The moment I started reading. I got engrossed by your opening. Hehe... It reminds me of J.K Rowling's writing style but maybe its just me. You the described the scenario well and really gave me a vision of what's really happening.
D.sweet's 2008-09-18 . chapter 1
"I love this story". Rin has the cold quiet personality that everyone loves and the interaction between characters is almost real. Usually a character goes through a change at the end of a story. The fact that it happened before the story began shows the creativeness of the author. The descriptions in the story was like poetry, the hair on the characters, the clothes, I really was their. this is truly one of my favs.
KiTsUnE-shi 2008-06-16 . chapter 1
hey..this fic is nice..i love the qoutation below..at the end..hehe
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