| Reviews for a lovely fool |
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Isca 6/23/08 . chapter 1Beautiful imagery! |
Ashelin 6/12/08 . chapter 1And the last stanza seems to be a confirmation of the previous two. I liked it, it was short and precise, but not cliche. Good job. |
sporty southern rockin gal 6/12/08 . chapter 1I think it is good, possibly melonchally-maybe the downside to love...pain, regret, uncertainty. |
Saranghae 6/12/08 . chapter 1This is fair, but I don't think the end of your poem finished it well. |