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| Isca 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful imagery! |
| Ashelin 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseAnd the last stanza seems to be a confirmation of the previous two. I liked it, it was short and precise, but not cliche. Good job. |
| sporty southern rockin gal 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI think it is good, possibly melonchally-maybe the downside to love...pain, regret, uncertainty. |
| Breathing Death 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is fair, but I don't think the end of your poem finished it well. |