That's really beautiful.

This has some wonderful imagery: 'The sky is crying. That's what a fallen star is. A tear.' and the last line was nicely done. Kudos. Anyways, keep up the good work.

Beautiful story. It's very poetic. Nice work.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

Twilight Starr

This is really sad and beautiful. You use such powerful imagery. Breahttaking, well done.

It's beautiful. Part's of it are questionable[slightly confusing] but It's fullfilling, nonetheless.