YAY! An update! Keep it up! This story is wonderful!

Hello! Your story has been added to the Ultimate Story List on this website: .uk
I've only reached chapter two, but I'm really drawn in :) As soon as I post this I shall continue reading! Nice plot and writing so far =]

I love this chapter. Maybe I'm goofy or something, but it made laugh plenty of times, too.

your story is so good that you made me log in...congrats! i hope you update very soon!

Sorry, friend. It took me a long time to read and review this chapter because I've been busy. But here I am. Anyways, I like how this story is going, and definately partial towards Lily. Good work.

Vampires and werewolves stories never interest me, but I must say this story HAS caught my eye. I will continue to read on.

GREAT! Great story, my favorite subject...Vampires AND Werewolves, a never ending battle between the two...So just wanted to ask, have you read Twilight?

I like this so far... alot actually. Eric sems like a care free kind of guy, likeable too, and not at all a flat character. selene on the other hand was kind of annoying, not like I think her character sucks, more or so like the way she acts is annoying reminds me of a nagging mother lol.

I REALLY like this story, it's very discriptive. I also liked how you've changed things about the vampires. Unlike the classic vampired your characters have a reflection, and they come out during the day (well it seemed that way when they were out in the clearing)the werewovles, I like eric he's the bad boy that kind of stuck up lily needs. keep it up.

im prouda you! you updateded and it's longer!! Whee!!
Lily's awesome i like her! :)
Love your story!
Nat

That's a very intriguing prologue! I can't wait to see what the story is like.

you totally need to continue it! I love it so far
even if it is short! :D
ND