1. I would rate this T since you use the word fondling, I really don't think that's appropriate for 9 yrs old.

2. You punctuated the quote perfectly, but other than that you only have a few periods here and there, which didn't really make sense.

3. The piece was confused, but I'm thinking that was on purpose. I did like the beginning descriptions, though I don't think ppl anticipate school more like dread it... lol. I also like the simile in the ending.

It's a really nice piece.

I like it, I can just see the emotion in it