This was pretty funny, it wasn't what I was expecting, but it was funny. I do hope that this hasn't happened to you! But I liked it, it just ened rather fast, which I guess is what you where going for, but I would have like more discriptions to make the ending more powerful. NICE STORY though!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

It's a great story. I really enjoy the subject matter, making fun of customer service employees, and thus making fun of the very foundations of capitalism itself. Not that there's anything wrong with capitalism, but it does yeild funny results, such as this story. It is a bit short though. It probably would be better if it were just a chain of gags each showing the salesperson's incompetence progressively. But what you have is great. I hope to see more.

Very nice! It's short, but covers everything very well. I feel bad for the customer! The poor guy! Great job with this! A lovely (and funny) oneshot!
=D
Kay