Wow I loved this. The imagery was absolutely beautiful and it was written well as well. Excellent job!

"of reds and oranges and browns"... I would say "reds, oranges and browns" just to make it less wordy

"The figure pausing for a moment, dips their fingers" I know you probably don't want the reader to know if it's a male or female, but their is plural so it should be his/her or even it maybe. This applies to the they in the paragraph as well.

"but which now" you just used the word which and I don't think you really need it.

"itself in it’s stones"...its

I like this... your descriptions are really beautiful & I like them a lot. You can picture them and they're not overused. Well done.

the imagery is very peaceful.

Beautiful, simply beautiful. You can picture your self there and see it exactly as it is. A wonderful descrption...

Beautiful job at painting a picture and description. Lovely work.

~Twilight Starr~

Very nice! Vividly written, nice attention to detail. I could totally see this place in my head...