Those last 2 lines were very powerful. Nice. Really... :)

What a beautiful story! So melodramatic!

Oh! This has so much meaning. It's so good and short, quick and to the point. I love this!

"I fell for you

You didn't catch me."

Wow...words cannot describe...

I could praise this word choice all day and it still woudn't measure up! Amaxing.

Utterly incredible.

Purrs,

Frenchie-chan

This left me feeling nostalgic. Also, I like how you used that word. I don't read much poems with the word nostalgic/nostalgia in that context. I have no idea why the line stop me is in quotation marks. There's also some parts that need punctuations. Other than that, this is a really good poem. Good job.

-C.N

Sad...mysterious...deep...intruiging...and I spelled that wrong, didn't I?

Hello! Thought I'd return the favor and review one of your poems!

I like this. It's sweet and sad. I like the "stop me" put in there. It's very pretty. Well done!

This is very nice. I like that you can convey many different feelings from this.

i like this, it really gives new meaning to the word fall.

"nostalgic". interesting word. not used often. ;) kudos on that alone. using interesting & uncommon words is always a bonus point. lol.

srz

OK I'll get on thing outta the way: I think the "too low to be listened" bit should be "too low to be heard"

Otherwise, great use of pun, works really well, and striking last line! Excellen poem :D

fleur

"nostalgic " nice word.

and i really like the last line.

This is very good, I like it, especially the meaning behind it x

Beautiful, I love the puns with the double meanings of "fall".

I like the bases for this poem. I especiall like the last two lines

I fell for you

you didn't catch me.

It all seemed a little choppy, but the point of it and the parts that did flow were very good.

Nice work.

Beautiful. You made every feeling associated with the word "fall" come to life. An image of a leaf even came to mind. I think my favorite aspect of this poem is how short it is for how many different feelings and images it shows. That's great!

Beautiful poem! Write on!