I stumble across this little fic every couple of months, and I always love it! Should have favorited a long time ago... I love how both the characters are so dysfunctional that they only function togethr. Nice. :)

I loved this. Although it wasn't crazy long, it felt like an entire story, which is perfect. I loved the characters. Especially the way they tried to run from each other in the end. It was dramatically cute. XD

Aw. I love it.

loved this! especially when they were both fleeing the motel...you have serious talent for both dialogue and the laughs :D and the descriptions were great, especially the transvestite at the start...Mike. I LOL'D.

~Katie

This is brilliant; original and like a breath of wonderful fresh air. Oh, and a bloody riot.

Hi. I enjoyed it. So am reviewing. Wish you'd write more - specially like the raw style here. Messed up people finding lives in the squalor.

Write more. Did I say that already?

Hi, I just wanted to say that I think your story here is a real piece of art. It is offically going into my favorite stories of all time category. I especially loved the end bit, with the rest of the song? Lovely.

I viewed your story. You are a person.

Where did you learn to write so furtively? Are you an enemy of the state?

Simply read.

Livi

dude, love.
Seedy and kind of hopeless and still pretty darn beautiful, if'n ya know what i mean.
I like "A spray of outraged spit splattered me."
My inner year 12 english nerd squeals and fangirls that line.

love.

What a smile-inducing story. I'm just all full of happy now. Quite Pricilla-ish and a little Paris, Texas - y... those are the connections my brain makes, anyway - not just content (protitutes and drag queens) but also pace and style. Really great - thoroughly enjoyed reading. I hope you write many, many more things in the future.

I have to say that this was certainly interesting. Not exactly what I was expecting, but it was humorous nonetheless.

I love the fact that they tried to sneak out on each other. I'm still trying to wrap my head around WHY they did that, but in the end it turned out happy I suppose. They're funny drunks, too.

I think my favorite line out of the whole story was "His heart beat for me then. I know 'cause mine beat for him. That moment and every one after that." It was just so cute and adorable, and I loved it.

I do hope you write other stories or one-shots or whatever. I really do like your writing style.

That said, you might want to enable anonymous reviews. It makes it easier for those who don't want to sign in to review or just don't have accounts to review your stories.