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| LadyRini478 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseVery deep and meaningful. The shortness and briskness of this poem made your word choice and descriptions twice as powerful. The world is so corrupt, even in something as precious as a child's education. This poem is very political, which I enjoy. I am interested to see what else you will write. |