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| J.M. Baldwin 2008-06-24 ch 1,  | abusethis made ME smile, haha. I love the fact that you are so willing to help someone smile, or make them happy, or whatever the case may be. this is to the point yet makes you think for the amount of time it would take to read a normal poem...and that, in my mind, is what a haiku should be. Good Job! |
| simpleplan13 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI like the title its cute. I also like the last line, it changes the poem nicely. |
| The Goddess of Chaos 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseVery blunt and to the point - i like it! |