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| LucyDoll 2008-07-07 ch 8,  | abuseTHANK GOD YOU DIDN'T SHAVE JASPER! If you had...I would have been very, very upset. And now I really want to go shopping. And I laughed during the breakfast scene. |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-23 ch 7, | abuseI love eggplant. And I love "BBQ Naked: Show Off Your Buns". Yep. It made me laugh and laugh and laugh until I cried. So that is now on my Special Things List. Anyway, more? |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-19 ch 6, | abuseUm, wow? That's amazing. All of it. And Jet is so in love with Zi. More? |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-18 ch 5, | abuseAw! I am so proud of Jet! I mean, how cute was that?! And the rest of this chapter was simply amazing, as always. |
| Dige Skiera 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a review for 1-4. I love the story so far. You kept me reading and you kept the suspense in queue until an awesome explosive moment that satisfied me at the end. It was amazing. I feel like I can understand your characters, and the descriptions are more than surreal. Keep up the good work! |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-16 ch 4, | abuseOh...my...god. That was pretty action packed. How did Jasper survive? And Jet...ohmygawd! |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-16 ch 3, | abuseYAY! Update! |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-14 ch 2, | abuseWait...is Zi the fat Indian girl? And what else happened?! Did they eat those guys? Ew. That'd be gross. Anyway, I want an update soon cause it's just that awesome and I want to know what else happened! Gargh. (that's me making a frustrated sound) |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseCan you say, Yummy!? And Jasper is totally hotter than Jet. And I loved "his ego was as big as his nose". That's like the best sentce ever. I laughed super hard when I read it. :) |