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| simpleplan13 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like this piece, it's a great description of a conversation. I like the metaphors you use because they fit perfectly and are interesting. I also like the ending because it's very true. Nice job. PS. If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
| Undead Serenade 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseAgreed. The person I'm closest to I talk to for hours on end. And we've definitely had all kinds of emotions and relationships. This is all very true. Good insight into life. |