Well, you were right. Bloodsinger definitly make more sense :) Things I noticed: not enough smut :), I really like the whole bloodsong thing - especially the part where Lionel thinks it's the most orgasmic thing he's ever heard, I love the pet name "little lion", I love all the names in this story, and I would do a little less paragraphing when you're writing diologue. Usually a new paragraph clues the reader in that someone new is talking, but I noticed quite a few times in this where it was the same person and I had to keep careful track of exactly who was talking. Also, I was really lost as to whether the narrator was a guy or a girl in the first chapter (I figured it was a guy, and it got cleared up really fast, but still), but I guess he sorta is . . . ? Oh, and I so wasn't expecting the transgender thing. Ok - last note - the medical aspects of this seemed really unrealistic. I don't know much about it, but the hospital and psych ward didn't seem really real . . . A lot of emotional depth for a piece of its length - maybe a little more extension of the whole "love" thing. As always, just some suggestions. Kudos, another vamp work I can tolerate :)

that was a great story. though i was confused by the transexual thing. but i kind of understood it.^_^

freakin awesome!

Leila is like a roach...SHE JUST WON'T DIE!

lol, good work!

yes! sex first the violence...then more sex! ^_^

wow! awesome work!

wow...i mean...wow! keep up the gr8 work!

wow, pretty cool ^_^ i feel bad for Lionel

suspence! such a good plot! but i am getting confused at times with, for example - the song, and other things related to that. it would be great if you could explain a bit about that. but overall, keep up the good work, updates?? ;)

This story is a little odd, but I'm really liking it so far. Keep up the excellent work! ^.^

gaa, this is so cool, i love it n im not a big fan on vamps, weres are better lol

Wow, this looks set to be really interesting! And I'm rather intrigued by this singer/song idea. I'll keep following as long as you keep writing!