Wow, this was so kawaii! I loved it, and the way you wrote it. With all the short lines and paragraphs. It made it seem like someone was talking, actually telling a story, in person.

LOVED IT! Great work!

-Kaiyako K.

very nice very nice... Only wish it had a sequel

That was cute. I liked how you were able to keep our attention without having to splurge on detail.