This story was so sweet; and so sad. But children have such vivid emotions like this, and it's amazing how you caught this into a short story. Good job. :)

O.M.G. Wow. Seriously. Wow. That gave me goosebumps! That was amazing hun. Seriously amazing. Everything is so vivid and detailed... my eyes were glued to the screen. So sad =(. Great job though. Really Wow.