This story was really, really cute! One of the best fractured fairy tales I've read in a long time, that's for sure. :)

Hi! I like your story. Thank you!

cute! Maybe not so long, but cute anyway. so to be able to make it longer; more details? What about her mother? Just it is so cute that i didn't want to stop reading. this seems to be for a young/old people to read. mostly for young but it isn't staying in the young catorgory it sort of goes into a older also. do you understand what i'm saying? it seems to be directed towards younger kids but then some parts seem more proper for older people

so to sum it all up: cute,short,mixed(be better if it was just for young kids but then some parts...)

thank you for this story

That was very well written. And I never thought someone would be able to re-write Beauty and the Beast in a Western setting AND it turn out to be fun to read, nice job!
Keep on Writing! ;D

I liked it! Very interesting view. Completely different than anything I've read. It felt kinda rushed but I'm assuming that you had to keep it short. Good job with the descriptions and everything again. I like =)

Nice work. Just the last part when William said, "Annie, did ya really mean it?”, it didn't sound in-character to me. But other than that nice story...