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| SpazzyBatty95 2008-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really good! My only complaint is that the syllables are off in the lines "All they do is sit and chat/why can't we ever do that?" I think one more syllable needs to be added to the second line to make it sound better... but then again I might just be insane. :) |
| centuriespast 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseHaha Im on summer break I like school actually Im moving and wont have my friends as a comfort. But o well Im a school and band geek |
| brokencrystal7 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abusethat is so true. i really dont like school but i just like going to see my friends. |
| fictionpressusername 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseHey that was hilarious! Cookie for you! |