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| fatbird33 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abusefantastic point made here! and the rhyming was awesome |
| brokencrystal7 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abusei have never thought of that...but it is true. |
| Breathing Death 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI always thought it was wrong to tell children that these fairytales were real. I never really believed in them, but many I knew did. I believed it was pathetic to lie about things, and that some children's hearts could be broken when hearing the truth. It's such a blatant and silly lie to tell, as well. Great job with the poem. It's very good, and the flow is like a stream. |