Reviews for Ritte Mich Rescue Me

AlwaysForTheGay 2008-07-28 ch 1,	abuseI really liked that... And I only opened it because it had a Tokio Hotel title...and some Tokio Hotel content. shot But I really liked it xD Good job.
mobman 2008-06-14 ch 1,	abuseVery angst. At the same time this had a great idea behind it. However, I do have some critisism... if that isn't a bother. Its only one thing. As you dont seem to write in this style often, alot of the expression here seems forced. It opened up real well, but you changed from "me" to "you". There was too much emphasis on noise for my personal taste, and the details of the sight suffered. Don't get me wrong, it was very emotional. And very well thought out. I get the picture, but I expect more from you, Irony. I've been reading your stuff. If you add another chapter, try maybe just throwing the raw emotion at us, the cold imagery. Don't be afraid of it. As I say "If your not hurting someone, you're not cutting deep enough" -Mob, SN (As Vince said, you should write with us)
The Suicide Nation 2008-06-13 ch 1,	abuseNicely done Irony. Always write what you feel, regardless of other people's perspectives. I enjoyed the imagery in it. I could feel it through the story itself, which is always good. I still think you should come write with us. Sincerely, The Suicide Nation, Vince