oh emm ge keep writingg keep writingg!

:O! baking a cake?!?! i must know! please keep writing its so good x]!

:o i wonder who the shadow is. Poor matthew x]! hmm maybe you should try out writing another fic about Mishiba x Matthew pairing, then when you've written out some things you can put it on here to see what readers think :]

I love ur story!!
please write more :]

yay! you really updated! I'm so happy! thankyou! the chapter was funny, and sad, and confusing... all at once, lol. Can't wait for the next one :)

omg. i really like this story. will it be continued? or is this it for this story?

LOL!! I luv this story! PLZ continue!
BTW: I also like your Tactics fic on fanfiction ^_^

there's a few mistakes here and there, but i like it.

I think it's Nicky. There is definitely something about him... especially when you consider what happens at the end of the chapter.

This reminds me a lot of XHolic. Almost everything about it. Nicky reminds me of a grumpy version of Watanuki. Clyfe reminds me of a more cheerful version of Domeki and Sakamoto reminds me of Yuko.

OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY MIDNIGHT CLAWS PLEASE KEEP WRITING! >< Yer such an awesome writer and I love it!

I totally think you should continue it. It's rather cute in it's own way. I hope to read more of it.

~Shik

There are a lot of run-on, jumpy sentences and the mechanics seem to be off in general, sometimes there are no dots or commas, but there sure are a lot of sentences ended with three dots.

I like the first sentence though.

But then she was snuggling the pillow and eating sandwich so I didn't understand much.

The strongest trait is perhaps the dialogue. It's realistic!

I also like the characters because they're believable.