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| Ashelin 2008-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseSad. It had a cool beat. I think the best thing about this was that even though the words could be considered lacking depth and a tad cliche, you put it out there in such a style that made it really perfect for the poem. You did well. And in case you were wondering how to make stanzas so they don't do that, you just go to the "Edit/Preview" button after you upload a poem, and then you backspace each [one at a time] and press shift and enter at the same time. Good poem, keep up the good work. |
| Breathing Death 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseVery intriguing poem. Excellent job. |