| Reviews for Moody Blue |
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CostumeForAGutterball 1/7/09 . chapter 1Love the imagery in this one-so soothing! |
Satsumaimo 6/21/08 . chapter 1This makes me feel peaceful. The imagery is wonderful, of course, like it always is. |
Thoughtful Silence 6/14/08 . chapter 1This was good. I just loved the first and last lines... they made this poem for me. Beautifully tranquil. Um... I didn't like the 'speed of sound' line though... - not only because it reminded me of a certain British band :) - it just didn't fit, in my opinion. Anyways, keep up the good work. -T.S. |
Isca 6/13/08 . chapter 1"Watch the sun rise at the edge of the world." Peaceful imagery! |
kloun mannequin 6/13/08 . chapter 1it's a peaceful imagery. |
Dani P 6/13/08 . chapter 1nice. very peaceful kind of feeling. well done indeed. |
Nemonus 6/13/08 . chapter 1Good. The first line was great, very unexpected. "Moon births a glow/That caresses continents/At the speed of sound" threw me off, not because of rhythm or word choice, but because wouldn't a glow travel at the speed of light, not the speed of sound? Otherwise, quite good, quite serene. |