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Zonne 2008-06-15 . chapter 1
That was intriguing. I like the description of the Genie, created a funny picture.

I also like the way the guy thought, the problem was, he seemed to be older than 25 - which was one of the choices. I think the thought process and language when he talked out loud seemed a much older man.

Very funny and I think I'll see if I can find the next chapter? I hope there is one

Zonne
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noh-mask-of-oblivion 2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Hmm... this seems like it could definately go somewhere.
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