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Lion Hunt
Elephant-Artist
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
It is a great piece. It made think of a lion and it scared me some too. You used great descriptions. On the teeth flash part when I read those words I saw an immediate flash in my mind. Great job again.
kloun mannequin
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
that's a great description, I can feel the hunt.
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