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Vampire
Elephant-Artist
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
It was good. Nice repetivness. Next time make something longer.
Twilight Starr
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
The repetition works. Well done. Keep writing!
Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.
~Twilight Starr~
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