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| MistyRose14 2008-06-15 ch 2,  | abusewhoa, je kiffe! completely different tone from the prologue, but that's great because it shows your versatility. let's see...everything else seems to be going swimmingly - from characterization, grammar, etc. c'était vraiment cool! |
| MatsuGlare 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abusevery nice prologue...=) though i still don't know where this story is going but i have this feeling this will become one of my faves! really great job! =) keep up the good work! if you have time I would highly value your opinion in my story...=) |
| Vanguard Ziggy 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was a good intro, and its sets up the story perfectly. Please update soon, and if you don't mind, read my story, Children of Alechemy and tell me what you think. |
| Shiori-sa 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseHello :D! I don't have any clue what will happen in the next chapter... but this is why I felt exitement! Although this is more look like a proloque, I hope you could continue this story. Astha. |
| MistyRose14 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abusechouette (great)! truly...this is highly intriguing. um, i honestly wish i had more to say, but your words were so impactful, i'm just speechless. more, please! |