wow,

i love it so far and wish you would continue. I loved how descriptive you were. The words you used to set the tone of the story are great and the repetition for me only helps to reinforce the idea. I have read many stories that have weres and i do think you have the begining of a good story. i would be interested to find out who becomes of the alpha male and the wereling..

Hmm, there was a bit too much on setting in the first few paragraphs for me, but once I got into it, it was quite good .

I have a perverted mind and giggled at "The alpha male of the group stood tall and erect". Hehehehe.

Though I think sometimes you tend to repeat adjectives by using synonyms. Guh. That doesn't really work for me.

But all in all, no real complaints :D.

hey very imaginative. Although I don't read these kind of stories I thought I'd return the favour. Hope you continue on with this and write more

seems interesting. you should consider continuing.