This is very true-i love how your feelings, thoughts and basically your mind is sort of splayed across the open page. This is a great piece simply because its not over worded yknow? its just simple, as if your speaking straight into us...and thats just it, its so easy to understand where your coming from yet then again so complex because we know its not from our same experiences...

gah lol im getting weird and confusing-but i love how you wrote and organized this.._ wonderful piece! keep it up!